changeset 36:a127a7d7850d

Addressed a comment from Qin about definition of Diameter EAP proxy meaning.
author Sebastien Decugis <sdecugis@nict.go.jp>
date Fri, 28 Aug 2009 11:05:23 +0900
parents fa5b03196871
children a22fb485486b
files draft-ietf-dime-erp-01.xml
diffstat 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) [+]
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--- a/draft-ietf-dime-erp-01.xml	Fri Aug 28 10:29:14 2009 +0900
+++ b/draft-ietf-dime-erp-01.xml	Fri Aug 28 11:05:23 2009 +0900
@@ -113,18 +113,23 @@
     <author fullname="Qin Wu" initials="Q." surname="Wu">
       <organization abbrev="Huawei">Huawei Technologies Co.,
       Ltd</organization>
+
       <address>
         <postal>
           <street>Site B, Floor 12F, Huihong Mansion, No.91 Baixia
           Rd.</street>
+
           <city>Nanjing</city>
+
           <code>210001</code>
+
           <country>China</country>
         </postal>
+
         <email>sunseawq@huawei.com</email>
       </address>
     </author>
-    
+
     <date year="2009" />
 
     <area>Operations &amp; Management</area>
@@ -360,9 +365,10 @@
         of resources and SHOULD be avoided.</t>
 
         <t>To achieve implicit bootstrapping, the ER server must act as a
-        Diameter EAP Proxy, and routing must be configured so that Diameter
-        messages of a full EAP authentication are routed through this proxy.
-        The figure bellow captures this mechanism.</t>
+        Diameter EAP Proxy as defined in Diameter Base Protocol <xref
+        target="RFC3588"></xref>, and routing must be configured so that
+        Diameter messages of a full EAP authentication are routed through this
+        proxy. The figure bellow captures this mechanism.</t>
 
         <figure title="Figure. ERP bootstrapping during full EAP authentication">
           <artwork><![CDATA[
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